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这些托福写作语法错误的坑,你还在义无反顾的跳吗?

文章作者:培顿教育 发布时间:2017-07-29 浏览量:688
文章摘要:
托福一对一培训培顿教育今天和大家分享下关于托福写作中一些常见的语法问题,希望大家在备考过程中引以为戒。
 
在考试中出现的写作高频语法错误主要包括以下几种:
1.双谓语
2.主谓不一致
3.名词裸奔
下面我们来一一解析。
1.双谓语
汉语注重意合,英语注重形合,也就是说英语的句法要求严禁的结构,每个句子有且只有一个谓语动词,而考生们很容易按照汉语的习惯去写英文,把碎片句连在一起,这就容易导致一个句子中有多于一个谓语。错误示例:
Second, I think Parents should buy the low technological cell-phone to their kids,in this way ,children may not have chance to use smartphone,this can reduce the overused of the phone.
改正:Second, I think parents should purchase less-advanced cellphones for their kids, which can reduce the overuse of smartphones.
另一种导致双谓语的原因是考生对单词词性把握不牢固,如把maybe这个副词拆成了may和be,多出了一个谓语:
The parents may be want them to use the cell- phone to find them easily.
改正: Maybe parents want them to use cellphones to get in touch easily.
 
2.主谓不一致
主谓不一致是大多数考生都难以幸免的语法错误,出现这种现象的原因也和汉语习惯有关。在汉语中不论是什么时态,也不论主语是什么,谓语动词总是以原形出现。然而英语中的谓语动词千变万化,要考虑时态,情态,以及主语。如Be动词的形式有很多种,需要随着时态和主语写成相应形式。在一般现在时当中,第三人称单数做主语,谓语动词要变成单三形式。考生错误示例:
Secondly, the children spend more and more time online, which make time they spent on their parents less and less. The decrease of time will make they misunderstand each other.
改正: Secondly, children spend more and more time online, which makes the time they spend on their parents less and less.
First, a couple of sea cows is enough for a family to eat for several days.
改正: First, a couple of sea cows are enough for a family to eat for several days.
 
3.名词裸奔
可数名词单数单独出现,此种现象简称名词裸奔。托福一对一培训培顿教育请各位考生一定要记得给可数名词单数穿上衣服(限定词),不要让它们再裸奔了。顺便给大家普及一下限定词包括冠词(a, an, the)物主代词(my,your...)指示代词(this,that...)关系代词(whose,which...)疑问代词(what,which...)不定代词(no,every...)基数词(one,two...)序数词(first,second...)量词(a lotof...)等。考生错误示例:
Therefore, some people don't think the number of hunting is too large to make sea cow extinct.
改正: Therefore, some people don’t think the number of hunting is too large to make see cows extinct.
 
以上的这些语法错误虽然是大多数考生常犯的高频错误,然而只要在掌握了正确写法并在写作中多加注意,是能够避免的。然而即使考生能够不犯这些错误,如果没有高级的句式加以辅佐的话,仍然是难以取得高分的。我们来看一看评分标准关于语言运用的这一部分原文。
 
Display consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity.
在语言运用方面通过展现句式多样性,用词准确性和表达地道性展现出一致的能力。
 
在词汇和地道性上需要考生长时间的积累,较容易达成并且在短期内考生可以迅速提升的能力就是做到句式多样性,这意味着可以通过使用各种高级句式来为我们的作文加分,而小编发现在本次模考的考生中几乎没有人使用到高级句式。那么高级句式到底是些什么样的句式,具体应如何应用,下面我们来一起了解一下。
在写作中能经常应用到高级句式包括倒装句、强调句、双重否定、虚拟语气等。这些句式可以生动的表达作者的主观态度,加强语气,经常用在中间主体段落的小结和文章结尾段起升华作用。举几个高级句式的栗子大家感受下。
 
倒装句:Never can distance hinder the stable friendship between people who live apart.
无论如何,只要彼此心灵相系,距离便无法阻隔异地朋友之间的坚固友情。
强调句:It is for the benefit of maintaining the ecological balance that human beings ought to protect the endangered animal species.
正是为了维持生态平衡,人类才应该保护地球上濒危的动物物种。
双重否定:Never has the using of smart phones failed to fascinate us in modern society.
智能手机的使用一直都吸引人们的眼光。
虚拟语气:If all students had chances like this, then they would all be much more knowledgeable in their fields.
如果每个学生都能得到这样的机会,他们将会更好的掌握自己的专业知识。
 
托福一对一培训培顿教育Z后送给大家一句话:If all test takers could master these writing skills, they would eventually achieve satisfactory scores(如果广大托福考生都能掌握这些写作技巧,大家都终将取得理想的成绩。)
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