2、怪异表达2：意思扭曲
有的时候，中文倒是想清楚了，但说出来的英文就……&@*#！
Half a year ago, when I was walking back homeafter work, I encountered a girl who was carrying a lot of books in apassageway of my apartment building.这个意思就……感觉你特别的土豪，这整栋楼好像都是被你买下了（此处应有塘主）
应该说：the apartment building I lived in
In a big family there are many peers 【who can play and study together】
这个意思就是：你的peers们相互之间一起玩耍，没你的事儿了。
应该说：many peers whom children can play and study with

3、怪异表达3：逻辑混乱
还有的时候，英文倒是没什么错，但就是……
怎么读怎么别扭！
Some students prefer to have their finalgrades determined by many small assignments, whereas others prefer to havetheir final grades determined by only a few big assignments. Which do youprefer and why?
这位同学这篇作文的第一个理由是：
小作业更好，因为结果更加客观公正，否则，学生遇到了一些意想不到的事情，就会拿不到理想的分数。在举例子的时候，ta说了这样一句话：
For example, catching a cold, encountering misfortune, or even being hungry will distort the results of their performance.
例如：感冒，遭遇不幸，甚至饿了？！？！
为啥饿了会被放到Z后？？？——真的是“食为天”啊！另外，饿了，为啥会影响小作业？饿了，你就吃点东西再做作业啊！
应该说：catching a cold, being into a coma due to Hypoglycaemia (lowblood sugar) (因低血糖而昏迷) or even hitting by a car (experiencing a car accident)感冒，昏迷，甚至被车撞 —— 程度逐步加深