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小A感叹到：世事难免沧桑，人生难免悲凉，有人生的地方就有江湖，有托福的地方脑袋全是浆糊！
小B安慰到：生活百般滋味，人生需要笑对。托福若想高分，葵花宝典Z对！
于是江湖刮起了一阵腥风血雨，人人追寻宝典的下落，不曾想今日宝典中的口语扩展秘籍竟落到沈阳托福培训培顿教育的手中，为了让江湖早日平息，我愿将宝典中的秘籍毫不吝惜的分享给大家，望谨记于心！
独立题Task1&2都明确要求考生在答案中给出足够的细节和例子来充实段子。而大多考生都一头雾水，到底何为细节？何种例子适合列举？归根究底就是扩展方向不清晰。
独立题准备时间只有15秒，可以说转瞬即逝，大多考生15秒内能够选定谈论的话题并写下分论点的关键词都实属不易，更何谈理清思路进行细节扩展？45秒回答时间便开始了一轮语无伦次的高谈阔论，内容空泛，不知所以。此为扩展难题！
所谓终极细节，就好比神经末梢一般，可以说到达了所有细节的末端，那么名字、数字和时间就是再好不过的末端体现了！在答案中毫不吝惜的加入你生活中的名字和数字吧，ETS老奶奶会为它而兴奋跳舞，因为你太会答题了！
每当举例说我的朋友，不要忘记带上朋友的名字；每当谈到做运动，不要忘记加上运动的时间和时长，这就是数字和时间的体现，多么的detailed, 不是吗？总之谨记，沈阳托福培训培顿教育建议的扩展原则是：As specific as possible! 越具体越棒！
一谈到举例，我们脑中便会冒出for example, for instance等字样，没错！这就是秘籍中的传统举例法，既可以举身边人的例子，也可以谈名人的故事，所谓事实胜于雄辩，就是这个道理；但除此之外，不要忘记，还有一种厉害的招式，那就是列举，一旦答案中谈到many这个词，后面一定要紧跟such as/like，并列举具体项目，使答案充分扩展，例如谈到周末可以做哪些活动，我们可以说We have many ways to relax on weekends, such as reading books, seeing movies or doing sports, like basketball, badminton and so on.
让我们用今年8月26日Task 1的考试真题作为范例，来见识以下第一式和第二式的厉害吧！
例题：University students encounter many difficult challenges in their study. Which challenge do you think is the most difficult one and how do you deal with it? （2017.8.26）
高分范文：Well, when I was 具体时间 in my second year of university, my algebra 代数 teacher 人名 Lisa was so boring that every time I was having her class, I would fall asleep. Since I lost my interest，I couldn't do well in it. Definitely that's the hardship I’ve ever met. To solve this problem, I came to my ladybro 闺蜜人名 Jessie for help. She helped me cope with the problems in a much easier and more efficient way.举例 For example,when I came across a confusing calculus 微积分 problem,she would teach me how to solve it in a smart way and nailed everything down within 具体时间和数字 10 minutes which (必备从句) saved me a lot of time. Later on, I made some progress and achieved higher marks in algebra exams. Finally, I regained confidence in it. That’s how I dealt with this problem. (总结部分不是必须的，有时间说，没时间可以不说)
厉害吧！路本是同样的路，就看你怎么走，练过葵花宝典后，得分要点全都有！
曾几何时，你是否有过明明分论点已经写好，却面对滴答滴答的秒表，无言以对，不知所措的时候？那么不要犹豫，赶快翻开破冰剑谱进行修炼吧！破冰剑谱，打破僵局，一共三招：有无对比剑法，过去现在对比剑法，以及各观点对比剑法。
例题：Which of the following three do you think is the most important for a great working environment?
1）Friendly co-workers
2）Flexible hours
3）A helpful boss
高分范文：Personally, I'd like to say that friendly co-workers are the most important factor for the working environment. Firstly, nice colleagues will help a lot to improve work efficiency. For instance, when my cousin Bob first came to his company Microsoft, he even didn’t know how to use the printer there. Fortunately, his colleague Jasmine helped him out in no time. 有无对比By contrast, if some of the co-workers are not so easy-going, we may feel really embarrassed and have less motivation to work.Besides, good relationship between colleagues will give us a good mood. We can hang out to go shopping or have coffee，chat for fun like gossiping about the movie stars，such as Tom Cruise and so on. In a word, friendly co-workers play a very important role in our career.
例题：Talk about one of your special ways to study. Explain the reasons why you think it is special. Include some details and examples in your explanation.
高分范文：As far as I’m concerned, to make wise use of my Iphone is one of my special ways to study. Here are some reasons you may find convincing. Firstly, it significantly increased my study efficiency.过去现在对比Before I got my Iphone, I used to spend much time on note-taking in class, which was really time-consuming. I even always missed a lot of important information my teacher said. Now with my Iphone, every time I simply take a picture of the notes in one second, which helped me better focus on what the teacher is saying and it's so much more time-saving.Besides that, I also started a study group using WeChat.My classmates and I share class notes and our ideas for group projects there all the time. In a word, using my Iphone has been a pretty unique and efficient way to help me study.
例题：Which one do you think is the best way to know a city?
1) Take an organized tour
2) Visit museums
3) Walk down the city streets
高分范文：In my opinion, visiting museums is the best way to know about a city. To begin with, it is much more time-saving than the other two ways.各观点对比 It may only take me about 2 hours to walk around a museum and get to know a city’s history and culture,while taking an organized tour or walking down the city streets may take us at least one day, or even one week, which is really time-consuming.In addition, we can get a more comprehensive understanding about a city by visiting museums because pictures and exhibits there can provide us with the knowledge of more than hundreds of years.各观点对比 However, we may only learn about the current situation of a city if we take an organized tour or walk down the city streets.That’s why I prefer visiting museums.
武术境界之登峰造极，既随心所欲，不受招式约束，无招胜有招，化腐朽为神奇！如若我们能够把沈阳托福培训培顿教育以上所讲的所有三个招式融合在一起，既扩展过程中，要么举例，要么对比，并在举例和对比中融入终极细节——数字，时间，名字等，那么我们就可以真正体会什么是托福很性感，答案够丰满！
例题：Some people prefer to work in an office, others prefer to work from home. Which do you prefer?
高分范文：I prefer to work in an office.Firstly, the atmosphere in an office can help me better concentrate on my work. 对比论证 If I work from home, there will be too much temptation, which may make me distracted. 举例说明 For example, I may surf on the internet 数字时间 for half an hour or have a cup of coffee enjoying sunshine in my balcony after lunch, which is really unnecessary. Secondly, the complete facilities in the office provide us with a good working environment,which can ensure our work efficiency. 举例说明 For instance, my cousin 人名 Bob told me that in his company 公司名称 Microsoft, he can have access to all kinds of equipment, 列举说明 such as printers, photocopiers，fast internet and so on. In a word, there will be no reason to stay at home finishing my work.
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