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【托福培训】11.17托福考试写作列举法万用表秒破题

文章作者:培顿教育 发布时间:2018-11-18 浏览量:669
文章摘要:一中午就看到同学们的各种朋友圈,今日考试稳啦,终于要分手啦。写作题目学生雇员了解一下...

一中午就看到同学们的各种朋友圈,今日考试稳啦,终于要分手啦。写作题目学生雇员了解一下...

学生炼狱,雇员三傻秒破题...

两段的主题句怎么写呢?我每次这种按人分类就不会写主题句了...下面托福培训培顿国际教育给大家提供一篇范文演示!

The most important factors that affect the lasting time of friendship

1. help each other on crisis or when things go wrong

2. have same interests                         

3. trust each other completely

今天这道题目是三选一的题目,牵扯到友情,很简单直接用学生雇员的套路来破题即可,下面放托福培训培顿国际教育今天刚出炉的范文。

开头段:

Friendship is something we should cherish, since true friends are the most intimate persons in our life besides family members. Therefore, it is crucial to find out how to maintain the long-lasting friend. Among the three options, helping each other on crisis or when things go wrong, having same interests and trusting each other completely, the first one hits my consideration perfectly.

主体段一:写学生,然后用“三重炼狱”的套路用列举法完成

Getting helps from friends when coming across crisis related to study could help consolidate the relationship between students and their friends – their classmates. Firstly, students often meet problems when trying to do their homework, since some of the questions they may not be able to solve and the deadline for the submission is almost there. If their classmates could sit down together and explain to them what would be the right equation to get applied to the math problem, or how to explain the chemistry phenomenon, it would be a relief for them and they would be grateful to their friends, causing to reinforce the friendship. Also, when the time for the exam is coming, a student who hasn’t finished the review would be so worried, and he urgently need the help from a friend to show him the most important key points covered by the teacher to pass the exam. They would appreciate this friend to a great extent, saying to his own heart that this guy would be my best friend forever. Talking about the application for universities, due to the intense competition, one student might be rejected by his dreamed school and get trapped in the emotion of depression. Under such circumstance, if his classmates could say some words to him that he deserves a better school since he is the best one, he could be encouraged to move on, and cherish the relationship with these friends more. Obviously, helps from classmates, who are also friends, in the period of crisis could let students know the importance of friends and so as to facilitate a long-lasting friendship.

主体段二:写雇员,用“三傻职业”的套路用列举法完成

Also, employees could develop the long term friendship with friends who could offer them hands for solving difficulties. When a programmer gets trapped in trying to find a hidden bug in his codes, he would be desperate, and if his friend, one colleague who is also a software engineer, could spend the whole night to be by his side for checking the codes together and finally locate the bug, he would be moved greatly. The relationship between them could be more firm. Also, it is not difficult to imagine a salesman would be in a status of worrying about failing to complete the sale performance. With this situation, if his best friend in the same company could share his own clients’ information and guide him to them to increase the chance for the sales, this guy would appreciate such help and remember this forever. In addition, probably a designer would meet difficulty to produce an artwork to satisfy a special need from the client, while if her friend knowing about her problem through talking with her and taking her to go shopping and playing for the aim to let her abandon the bothering matters. The refreshment actually could help inspire the creativeness of the designer and finally work out the artwork. She would thank to this friend and swear to to the same thing as pay back to her, helping the better maintain the relationship.

结尾:

Obviously, everyone would meet difficult moments, and if friends could offer hands at this time, the friendship would never get faded out. 

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