我们说思路要清晰简洁有条理，也就是要避免一个段落内部叙述过多的内容，尤为需要注意的就是，有些童鞋一写例子就收不住手！感觉例子贴近生活，很好写，就一直写！这是大家需要克服的！虽然你想写，但是人家未必感兴趣，你只要把大致的内容用两三句话表达一下即可，给人一个直观的概念比反反复复赘述要好得多！比如以下的例子就太长了。

（典型反例，引以为戒）When taking economy into consideration, people will find it there is no doubt that well-paid jobs are the better choice than another, because a well-paid job can satisfy people's need. The case of my friend David, who has a well-paid job can serve as a good example for my statement. He had been to a little company after he finished his college's study. This company only can give him little wages but there are no people compete him in work and he need not to worry about he will lose his job because this company cannot attract more employers. In the first, he thought he will relax when he works and it is true. Unfortunately, when a new kind of computer is put into the market and he wanted to get it, he found his wages cannot support it. And then his changed a job which can give him a well-paid but not safety. Finally, he can buy everything he likes.